It was a wet day, the rain just kept on coming down. All heat pumps were on their maximum setting, fireplaces were lit and children were wrapped up warmly in their blankets.
Outside the weather temperature was really cold and no-one wanted to venture outdoors.
Nature was looking extremely soggy! Deep puddles exploded everywhere and the grass glistened with heavy raindrops. Oh yeah! We get to play inside. I find the pack of cards and a quiet place to build my card tower. All is well in the world.
Hi Caleb,
ReplyDeleteI really like this small writing about the "Downpour of Rain".
I like how you remembered to do capital letters after full stops, while also using wonderful language eg. "Glistened, Exploded".
Next time, could you maybe include the expressions of the children in your class/house? It'd really extend your writing!
Thanks~