Crazy Family
I have six in my family plus a dog and a cat who has gone
It can be cuokoo at home when everyone is there
We play, we fight ,we watch you tube
We run around the house, mum says settle down
But we don’t listen, we just are too cuokoo
We go outside to the tramp where we play fighting games till the end
“Its last man standing” I shout
We come inside it’s you tube time
We all are on different things
The noise is loud
It’s crazy all the time
But I like my crazy family because they are mine
Hi Caleb, my name is parwin from Yaldhurst Model School and I think you did a great job writing a poem about your family. it was a great little poem because you wrote how they were and what they did, you also added speech marks to make someone speaking but some people forget to do that but you didn't! If you had to describe your family except crazy then what would it be?
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Parwin
Hi Caleb,My name is Abby and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
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I really like this poem is way better then I can do because i'm really bad at them and because it's really funny and it does sound like your family is cuckoo and crazy. I like to think of myself of crazy so does my friends I don't know why.
Did this take you along time to make?
Kind regards, Abby.
Hi Caleb this is Tyler your brother, I didn't know that our family is crazy. I thought that only we were crazy but sometimes our hole family can. Can you add in the people names in our family. How long did this take to make.
ReplyDeleteHey Caleb, I loved your poem! I could imagine exactly what you and your brothers were up to. I can also imagine your Mum telling you all to settle down! I liked bouncing on the trampoline when I was younger, too. Your final sentence answered a question that I was asking myself as I read it, so I don't need to ask it anymore! Great effort :)
ReplyDeleteHi Caleb It's me Jimmy I really like your post It was good I don't think I could do that amount of writing like that.
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