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Tuesday, 3 July 2018

Starry Night poem

Walt create a replica of the Starry Night painting and write a poem about Matariki.

Although the class recreated their Starry Night on paper with paint, I found this difficult and recreated mine on a Google Drawing.


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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 July 2018 at 10:35

    Hi Caleb,
    Its Ian from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I liked your poem.
    This reminds me when I used to do kapa haka.
    Did you like doing this.

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  2. Anonymous16 August 2018 at 10:53

    Hi Caleb,
    This is Sione from Room 6
    I really like your poem, and I love your image that you made in the background. I like the way you described the sun.

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  3. Anonymous23 August 2018 at 09:22

    Hello Caleb, It's me from Room 6, I love the way you created your own replica of the Starry Night painting, It is very detailed and colourful. I enjoyed the fact where you stuck with simple ideas, and you stuck with a nice colour scheme. Something you could work on though is your background, It's still amazing! Stay positive and keep up the great work Caleb!

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  4. Anonymous31 August 2018 at 11:52

    Hello caleb it´s Liam from yaldhurst school I really like how you have done your poem I renmber when I did kapa haka

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  5. Anonymous24 September 2018 at 13:26

    Hi Caleb, Its Sam from Yaldhurst Model School,

    I like your poem and I love your drawing, It looks just like the actual Starry Night painting ( Ish )! How did you make that? did you make it on a google drawings or on a different website? Because I really want to make artwork like yours! Next time can you try to make sure that your sentence makes sense.

    Kind Regards

    sam

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  6. Anonymous24 September 2018 at 13:32

    Hi Caleb, this is Thom from yaldhurst school.
    I think that this a really creative poem, and I like how it's about matariki. Next time you could explain why you did this poem and why it is based on matariki.
    Great poem.

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  7. Anonymous26 September 2018 at 13:35

    Hi Caleb! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I like your poem it really describes the picture starry night. This brings me back when my class did some painting and lot's of people did starry night, I did water lilies though.

    I like that way that you have added descriptive words in the poem, and I also like the background. The background is really good, and I can see you did your best.

    Next time I think that you should make it flow more, it's a little jumping from sentence to sentence. How long did it take you to make the poem?

    Great work!
    Mia

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