Friday 29 March 2019
pig the pug
I’am pig the pug. I don’t like sharing my toys but there’s a weird sausage dog that I live weth sow I sda all my toys into a pall and cladont of them and then I thalt the wedoy the soshe dog gradme but I was to evey I thall Crash thes days I sherg my toys weth the wed soshe dog and thas my stroe.
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Hi Caleb! Something I liked about your story was how you wrote it as Pig the Pug's point of view. Maybe next time you can check your spelling, punctuation etc so that your writing can make more sense. Keep up the great work Caleb!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Shikarn from Hornby High school. This is a amazing story about pig the pug. Next time you should cheek your spelling. Otherwise this was amazing. Pugs are my favourite dog.
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