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Monday 6 May 2019

Character Descriptions

Trevor is a sausage dog. He smells like a sausage. He is a long dog. He is a red dog like a sausage.

Sausages are his favourite food. He is kind. He like’s playing with Pig. He is passionate.
Pig get’s annoyed because Trevor ignores him. People wish they could be more like Trevor. Pig hates Trevor. Trevor is a helpful dog and Pig uses him.

Trevor - he’s tidy. He make’s people feel good. He’s good. He cleans his room.
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  1. Anonymous9 May 2019 at 13:34

    Hi there Caleb My name is Jonathon I am a year 6 student from yaldhurst school.I like the way that you have used similies and metaphors but can you tell me more like I dont know exactly what you are doing yours sincerly Jonathon.

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  2. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 12:39

    Hi Caleb, This is an amazing character description i love that you chose to do it about Trevor not pig. Maybe next time you could make sure that you words don't go off the page but apart from that is brilliant.

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